Night Mistress

i have already done the corrections on the hard copy. i really like your story, ems.

“I have a message from the Rio.” he stated flatly. I think you mean "Roi" here, right? like i said, take the time to re-read over you stuff. it's getting ...

that's not true. you have french club, ems. anyways, this is very.....different and interesting all in the same go. oh, to tell you, i bring IT(the book i was talking ...

Wow! Ems, this is really good. It was worth the waiting. anyways, i can find anything wrong with it, i will re-read it later to see if i can find ...

interesting.

exciting! update soon.

Hmmm. This is too short to be a story and it feels more like a summary or perhaps a prologue? Either way, I think you should change the format and ...

it's very good. i like it. maybe you should continue it.

When I was a child, I wished for many things: Someone to love peace happiness friends And I had all of that. My parents loved me. My people lived in ...

It's interesting.

in my opinion, it's one of the goods. I would read it over again and again. but that'sjust me.

Suzanne is right! you need to add more, give it some background.

Has anyone read that? It's about a girl named Jean, who has bad luck all the time. so her family nicknames her Jinx. she moves to New York to live ...

sounds like interesting book. i might check it out.

I like to read Paranormal/Romance like Vampire, werewolves, etc. And i write Fanfiction, Romance fiction and i am going to take a stab at paranormal/fantasy romance.